Colorless WIP

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Colorless WIP

Postby koizumi636 » Sun Mar 14, 2010 11:30 am

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/140310/70404_bear_adventure.php


A Colorless game

After the world has been sucked up by the black hole...
Colors were taken away... (leaving black outlines?)
And a bear will rescue the world and bring back colors

still Work in Progress

The graphics are drawn in pencils for a natural look

please tell me what you think about it
and the things I need to improve (probably lots)

Thanks XD
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Re: Colorless WIP

Postby armyboy » Sat Mar 20, 2010 6:09 am

Hi i really like the idea of the B/W game and the stage design its cute, it runs a little slow on my pc maybe because the Blur effect used so much, i think you could "blur it" make it a png or jpg an put it in the same place that will help with the speed.

inside tha house its hard to tell what things are platforms or background, maybe making the background pics in a little brighter gray than the platforms could help to figure it

LOVE THE VAN AT THE END! Keep it up!
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